Distant Rock Re-Writes

I had the opportunity to dabble several different ways with this photo.  After creating this draft to post, I realized that I posted this photo with a different haiku on September 22nd.  I think this year of daily postings is getting to me.  Oh well, I recreated the haiku several different ways and I am sharing them with you.

As I review my work, I did not think the first submission on the 22nd was effective,  I think at least one of the re-writes is more effective.  I didn’t get it at all in the second one here, but I included it anyways.  If you would care to comment on your favorite, or the most effective haiku in your opinion, or if you would like to add your own, I invite you to do so.  I am always grateful for the learning process, your input, and the fun of creating together.  This photo was taken on a trail near Shillington, (Reading) PA.

I love how the sun highlights the rock.

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