Distant Rock Re-Writes
I had the opportunity to dabble several different ways with this photo. After creating this draft to post, I realized that I posted this photo with a different haiku on September 22nd. I think this year of daily postings is getting to me. Oh well, I recreated the haiku several different ways and I am sharing them with you.
As I review my work, I did not think the first submission on the 22nd was effective, I think at least one of the re-writes is more effective. I didn’t get it at all in the second one here, but I included it anyways. If you would care to comment on your favorite, or the most effective haiku in your opinion, or if you would like to add your own, I invite you to do so. I am always grateful for the learning process, your input, and the fun of creating together. This photo was taken on a trail near Shillington, (Reading) PA.
I love how the sun highlights the rock.